loribonesscaswell

No one is who they seem to be! Nothing is as it appears! I get that but... More, I wanted more.

The premise of this story is very sound and very intriguing and this could have been an awesome story. As is it's o.k. but it needs to really be expanded.

The characters need to be better developed. There is no one to root for in this story. No one the reader becomes invested in. Also everything seems to happen at a frantic pace from Liam and Rebecca's wedding to the search and the traveling hither and yon. At times this pace adds to the suspense but it clearly draws away from it in others. The whole thing needed more detail and back story, the why so the reader can understand the journey. This story has a short story feel.

A quick mystery with twists that will keep you guessing past the final page. But like me you will be wanting MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!